People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns?
It is argued that city-dwellers in enormous cities cope with a lot of issues in daily life. The reason for this may be pollution and traffic jams. Needless to say, the government should lure people to move to smaller towns in order to settle down.
To commence with, it has been widely demonstrated that pollution is the main reason that inhabitants have to deal with. In large cities, it is undoubted that there are numerous vehicles, which release a lot of pollutants such as gas, emission into the air and environment. This results in a far-reaching consequence to people’s health. Furthermore, city-dwellers have lived in big cities encountering difficulty in transport in the light of traffic congestion. In reality, population density in large cities is extremely high, hence, in rush hours, triggering traffic jams. For instance, in Hanoi city, at about five-seven p.m., workers and employees from companies have difficulty going back home because of congested traffic.
Additionally, the government strives to persuade people to move to other cities that are in the vicinity of large cities. At first, in the hope of balance related to per capita income. Obviously, people who have lived in the outskirts may have lower revenue than that have lived in large cities, for this reason, the government aspires to balance the standard life of people nationwide. It is evident that this also results in bridging the gap between the wealthy and the poor. Secondly, moving to smaller cities may help inhabitants to reduce diseases. For example, a newspaper in VietNam conducted a survey about the rate of lung cancer, the rate in big cities is about 10 percent higher than that in the countryside. This is a persuasive reason that authorities always lure people to move to smaller cities.
- For school children their teachers have more influence on their intelligence and social development than their parents To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- when designing a building the most important factor is intended use of the building rather than its outward appearance To what extent do you agree or disagree 67
- Many university students live with their families while others live away from home because their universities are in different places Do you think the advantages of living with their families outweigh the disadvantages 61
- Research into new types of medicine and treatments are essential for improving health and deal with diseases Who do you think should fund these researches private companies individuals or governments 78
- Some people think the government funding should not be used for supporting art and culture while others think supporting cultural activities may be beneficial for the population and the culture Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07796610169 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81628212136 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532203389831 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8061219381 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.625 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4375 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235551686772 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797748407921 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806817435709 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174608416565 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629387184914 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.