The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on,above and below the surface of the earth.
The backdrop of this process diagram depicts the water cycle which is a running method of water on, above and below the surface of the earth.
It can be seen that, the process by which water is transformed and delivered to the earth surface is a multi step cyclical process and contains four main steps.
At the beginning stage, the scorching heat of the sun is used enormously. By using it, the water is transformed into vapour and moved to the sky. Then it condenced in cool temperature and became cloud. Some of these cloud comes to the earth when it rains and some of these comes to earth by becoming snow.
The cloud which became rain and fell to the atmosphere, generally gathered in lakes or pond as a rain water. The soil of lakes absorbe the water and store them as a ground water. After some time, the ground water linked with sea via two specific method. Then the process begin again.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e which is a running method of water on, above and below the surface of the earth...
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... a rain water. The soil of lakes absorbe the water and store them as a ground wat...
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...them as a ground water. After some time, the ground water linked with sea via two...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 735.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48170731707 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2230857723 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560975609756 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8132251997 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.5 112.824112599 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.2 5.23603664747 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352417596732 0.215688989381 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122154425335 0.103423049105 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.152058772153 0.0843802449381 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238449281375 0.15604864568 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.177605179466 0.0819641961636 217% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 13.2329268293 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.