Many students today may study abroad for a part or for all of their course Although studying abroad has many benefits for the individual student it also has a number of disadvantages To what extent do you agree or disagree with this

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Many students today may study abroad for a part or for all of their course. Although studying abroad has many benefits for the individual student, it also has a number of disadvantages.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?

Education is the ,ost important to achieve beter future and nowadays, more than 20 percent of student prefer to take foreign school. Most learners believe there are several problem when studying abroad. However, it also has the positive impact. From my opinion, I agree with this statement.

Students travel overseas to study at a reputable universities. The expect to attain the better job opportunities after graduate ftom this educational intitution. Based on my experience, 3 of 5 friends already accepted in the international companies with high salary adfet dinish from well-known university in the UK. Therefore, by enrolling in the foreign universities help learners easily to get the best job prospect.

On the other and, stay away from home can be challenging for a few students. A lot of differences culture can make the feel homesick and miss theie hometown. For instance, my friend who studied in University of Oxford said that she alwas cried for one months when she fristly come to England. She was difficult to adapted because she needed to do all he household worked by her own. Consenquently, going overseas also has the drawbacks and need some hardwork to adapted.

In conclusion, by learning in other countries has such benefir and obstacle that studets need to consider. Each students require to know the rason and discover the goal to achieve before they choose the exact place to study, especially in the unusual countries.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: THE_PUNCT[1]
Message: Did you forget something after 'the'?
Education is the ,ost important to achieve beter future an...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
Education is the ,ost important to achieve beter future an...
^^
Line 1, column 166, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'several problems'.
Suggestion: several problems
...school. Most learners believe there are several problem when studying abroad. However, it also ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 174, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'problems'?
Suggestion: problems
...Most learners believe there are several problem when studying abroad. However, it also ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 50, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'university'?
Suggestion: university
...travel overseas to study at a reputable universities. The expect to attain the better job op...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 64, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...s to study at a reputable universities. The expect to attain the better job opportunities ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 249, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one month', 'a month', or simply 'months'?
Suggestion: one month; a month; months
...of Oxford said that she alwas cried for one months when she fristly come to England. She w...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 108, Rule ID: EACH_EVERY_NNS[1]
Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: All
...obstacle that studets need to consider. Each students require to know the rason and ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 130, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'knowing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: knowing
...need to consider. Each students require to know the rason and discover the goal to achi...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, therefore, well, as to, for instance, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1219.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14345991561 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8269034556 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.704641350211 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5416978287 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2666666667 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.93333333333 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188683273318 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521160304098 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462867348871 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0940321488584 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047249480487 0.056905535591 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: THE_PUNCT[1]
Message: Did you forget something after 'the'?
Education is the ,ost important to achieve beter future an...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
Education is the ,ost important to achieve beter future an...
^^
Line 1, column 166, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'several problems'.
Suggestion: several problems
...school. Most learners believe there are several problem when studying abroad. However, it also ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 174, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'problems'?
Suggestion: problems
...Most learners believe there are several problem when studying abroad. However, it also ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 50, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'university'?
Suggestion: university
...travel overseas to study at a reputable universities. The expect to attain the better job op...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 64, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...s to study at a reputable universities. The expect to attain the better job opportunities ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 249, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one month', 'a month', or simply 'months'?
Suggestion: one month; a month; months
...of Oxford said that she alwas cried for one months when she fristly come to England. She w...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 108, Rule ID: EACH_EVERY_NNS[1]
Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: All
...obstacle that studets need to consider. Each students require to know the rason and ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 130, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'knowing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: knowing
...need to consider. Each students require to know the rason and discover the goal to achi...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, therefore, well, as to, for instance, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1219.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14345991561 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8269034556 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.704641350211 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5416978287 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2666666667 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.93333333333 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188683273318 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521160304098 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462867348871 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0940321488584 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047249480487 0.056905535591 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.