Many women are choosing to have children later in life. Why is this? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
There is a widely-held view among people about the increase in the number of females giving birth at a much higher age than that in the past. While there are several reasons from both personal and societal perspectives that can be held accountable for this trend, I am of the opinion that the disadvantages are overshadowed by the beneficial ones.
On the one hand, a change in lifestyle and the significant inflation in cost are the major factors that contribute to that tendency. In the past, it is undoubtedly true that males were the breadwinners that went out and earned for livings while women were responsible for staying at home and bringing up children. However, that is not the case anymore. In this era of gender equality, women are encouraged to pursue a high status in their career path, which leads to the fact that parents will have to share the same amount of responsibility in both making ends meet and raising their kids. As for societal perspective, the continuous inflation in prices demands both the fathers and mothers to take their financial status into consideration, ensuring that they have fully prepared enough money before giving birth.
On the other hand, even though I agree that this phenomenon might bring some disadvantages, I believe that those pale in comparison with the lucrative ones. Parents will be more mature if they decide to have a child at a higher age, which can minimize the percentage of fertility rate on a global scale. Furthermore, this allows people to ensure that their babies will be born in much more comprehensive living development, being equipped with fully demands needed. Hence, those kids will be educated adequately, which reduces the case of needy ones turning to crimes to be able to survive regardless of the behaviors that are against moral and ethical codes from the societal level.
In conclusion, it might seem sensible to me that many factors from personal and societal perspectives can be accounted for the trend of having a child late, the advantageous benefits still prevail over the detrimental ones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, still, while, as for, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1732.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97701149425 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75496644942 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568965517241 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.4451951899 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.333333333 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108602628105 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0351326503232 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312917849604 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0659513953958 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226034454235 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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