In many workplaces, online communication is now more common than face-to-
face meetings. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, technology is developing more and more, online communication has been favored by people and is chosen more than face-to-face communication. This essay will look at both sides of this issue.
Online communication saves costs on living and moving. When communicating online, we can turn on the device and sit anywhere we want and still be able to connect to the meeting without having to meet face to face. For example, if we live in the North and want to talk to a friend in the South, we can use a social networking app like Facebook... Apps like this make it possible for us to talk or even video call people anywhere instead of traveling a long time to see a friend far away. Moreover, online communication is also safer than face-to-face communication. Especially during the Covid 19 pandemic, the disease is easy to catch when people come into direct contact with each other. Like an unfortunate person infected with Covid without symptoms, they do not know they are infected, so eating with other people makes others more likely to get infected.
On the other hand, online communication can be interrupted by many factors such as poor connection or overcrowded online meeting rooms that can't enter the meeting room, reducing the quality of the meeting. For example, you have a class in the morning, but that morning you need to fix the electricity that makes you unable to attend the class.
To summarize, there are several negatives to communicating, I believe it can improve and I see the benefits of online communication more than the other side.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 141, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, still, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88014981273 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83504519159 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606741573034 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1254424417 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.583333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295415873313 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114720521856 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11199156175 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187351002334 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080951036481 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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