The map shows the changes of an office building between present and the future.
The first illustration provides information about current layout of an office building and the second shows how it will look after redevelopment.
The most striking feature to be observed is that substantial changes will be seen in an office building.
In the light of evidence, it is a crystal clear that at present, the building has two grass zones to the left and right side. The left one will be converted with
an outside seating area and three rows of chairs. A coffee machine, meeting area and two rows of chairs will be introduced to the right side of the building.
After scrutinizing the chart, currently, the main entrance is located on the right side. However, in future, it will be relocated to the centre. At the moment, there are four small offices however, in the future, these rooms will be constituted by two big offices. In future, kitchen and canteen will be replaced by officers. The storeroom will exist without any change.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 162, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ide. The left one will be converted with an outside seating area and three rows o...
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Line 8, column 99, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... is located on the right side. However, in future, it will be relocated to the centre. At...
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Line 8, column 266, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'In the future'?
Suggestion: In the future
...will be constituted by two big offices. In future, kitchen and canteen will be replaced b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, look, second
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 793.0 1615.20841683 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 163.0 315.596192385 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86503067485 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62368761205 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 176.041082164 54% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58282208589 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 506.74238477 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1679322381 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143434686178 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054560054237 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684911426958 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0968942945369 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673998279211 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.