Marketing and promotion is the key to a successful business
To what extent do you agree?
Nowadays developing and maintaining of a successful business is considered to b a very difficult task because there is a large of competition in the field of business. In my point of view, advertisement and promotion of products as well as good relation with costumers play an important role in the development of business.
In modern world, where everything is progressing very rapidly and the competition in very field of life is increasing day by day. In the field of business there is a large of competition and every person is facing a variety of challenges. For this purpose, promotion and marketing of different products in the market is very useful. For instance, a business needs to satisfy the people for the quality assurance of their products, inform and assure them about prices as compared to market prices, and to seek their attention have a great effect in business development.
Other ways of successful business include good relation and contacts with their costumers. It has a positive impression in the business, because good behavior with people attract them toward and help in dealing of products. People often visit some specific shops frequently because of good quality products, reasonable prices and nice attitude of the salesman.
In my opinion, business development needs some basic skills which include promotion, marketing and attitude with which a businessman can attract the attention of their costumers towards their products and have a good impact in the business fields as well.
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Essay evaluation report
and to seek their attention have a great effect in business development.
and to seek their attentions which have a great effect in business development.
because good behavior with people attract them
because good behaviors with people attract them
flaws:
No. of Words: 245 350
Minimum 250 words wanted
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 10 15
No. of Words: 245 350
No. of Characters: 1246 1500
No. of Different Words: 114 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.956 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.086 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.831 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 97 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 78 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 62 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 34 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.605 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.3 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.428 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.647 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.128 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 131, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...field of life is increasing day by day. In the field of business there is a large ...
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Line 3, column 364, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y useful. For instance, a business needs to satisfy the people for the quality as...
^^
Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'so', 'well', 'for instance', 'as well as', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.301886792453 0.247107183377 122% => OK
Verbs: 0.116981132075 0.155533422707 75% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0792452830189 0.0946595960268 84% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0452830188679 0.0501214627716 90% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0377358490566 0.0437548338989 86% => OK
Prepositions: 0.162264150943 0.122226691241 133% => OK
Participles: 0.0264150943396 0.0403226058552 66% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.90540578185 2.80594681477 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0150943396226 0.0326793684256 46% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0981132075472 0.0861772015684 114% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00377358490566 0.021408717616 18% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.011320754717 0.011925033212 95% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1522.0 1933.35771543 79% => OK
No of words: 245.0 316.048096192 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.21224489796 6.12580529183 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20517956788 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.4 0.374742101984 107% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.326530612245 0.28420135186 115% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.261224489796 0.203846283523 128% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.171428571429 0.137316102897 125% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90540578185 2.80594681477 104% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.037074148 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49387755102 0.56093040696 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 45.5943069734 60.7387585426 75% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0891783567 62% => OK
Sentence length: 24.5 20.7743622355 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7628124264 49.517814964 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.2 127.492653851 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7743622355 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 0.814263465372 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 57.1530612245 49.1944974215 116% => OK
Elegance: 2.45283018868 1.69124875643 145% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197203475296 0.332605444948 59% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.162866697256 0.102741220458 159% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0494842998107 0.0668466124924 74% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.693492066346 0.534860350844 130% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.125567436554 0.148594505496 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115534164131 0.134430193775 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464658168309 0.0742795772207 63% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.438447810241 0.324371583561 135% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.093293330136 0.0638462369009 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145727275506 0.228012699653 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449223538419 0.058150111329 77% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 10.4468937876 77% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.