Parents love shapes individuals and society. Parents know that their love and emotional availability are important to their children’s well being, they understand the profound and long-lasting impact they have in developing the young ones, physically and psychologically. In my opinion, I agree that in this modern lifestyles, many children are upset due to parents’ neglection.
In this competitive society, the majority of the children come from dual-income families. Earning has become parents’ top priority. They tend to spend more time working than interacting with the youngster. Also, they usually come home late and went out early in the morning. Not to mention that children will get upset and self-doubting. Children feel that they are not to be love and care. Academic failure is the most common behavior from youngster to get their parents’ attention. Teachers will contact parents to update the child’s performance and advise parents to supervise them.
On the other hand, technology improvement has become one of the reasons. It is noticeable that nowadays parents would rather give their children gadgets than communicate, as it is the fastest and convenient way to keep them silent. In fact, parents could complete their task without interruption. Conversely, in the past, parents would do more leisure and recreational activities with their children. For instance, watching a TV program and having a picnic.
It can be concluded that the lack of attention from parents will cause many problems. Parents who brought their children to this world must be responsibility to show their children love and care.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, if, so, well, for instance, in fact, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49411764706 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08254751668 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596078431373 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.1046734737 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8333333333 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1666666667 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.452379852121 0.244688304435 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130228449683 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787196546311 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.284495520413 0.151304729494 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024563485205 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.97 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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