It is an irrefutable fact that technological advancements are burgeoning in many countries and it has made the life of people much more easier. One such development is the accessibility of copyrighted music and books from the internet for free. In my opinion, to a great extent, this is a positive progression and the supporting points are discussed in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, free downloading of music and books from the internet enable people to save their money. In other words, in the conventional era, people relied on internet cafes and book stalls and provided them the money they demand. Moreover, it was a herculine task to download multiple files at a time. However, nowadays, people can avail their favourite music and books simply by browsing on the internet by self. For instance, a person can download multiple songs from online sites such as gaana, saavan and so on at the same time.
Furthermore, in the past years, a book was purchased rarely as it requires visiting a bookshop and bargaining with the bookseller. But, nowadays things have changed. Because of the flourishing technology, people can download books of their choice. To give a clear example, online applications such as e-books and English library aid people to download hundreds of books for free. This not only saves time but also improved the reading habit of people.
On the other hand, such free offers of internet risks the life of people who rely on internet cafes and bookshops for their daily living. Soon, it will pave the way to the reduction in the number of book stalls. But would that really happen? If the government would not take stringent measures to restore books and bookshops, it can happen.
To conclude, the emergence of technology in all fields help people to improve the standard of living of people. Even though it can affect the life of certain people, free accessibility of books and music is a positive development as it enable people to save money and time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 132, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...and it has made the life of people much more easier. One such development is the accessibil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, so, for instance, such as, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1655.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91097922849 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71478812805 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525222551929 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0357949133 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1052631579 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7368421053 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63157894737 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280252021964 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837853642403 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749927866536 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1668847592 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0819199602155 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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