In the modern world, people are no longer necessary to use food from animals or products from animals such as medicine and clothing. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
It is believed that today animals are no longer materials to produce food, clothing items or even medicine thanks to various advances and breakthroughs in science and technology. I completely agree with point of view.
Many recent studies show a plant-based diet not only provides sufficient nutrients for our body to function normally, but also prevents various potential health issues such as diabetes, high blood pressure or heart attacks. In fact that, nutrients from plants digest more easily than animals. An illustration of this is my grandmother who has been a vegetarian for 40 years and maintains good health at the age of 70. In terms of clothing, in my opinion, which is not worth sacrificing an animal’s life for a jacket or a dress. These days, artificial fur and high-quality synthesized fabric are being widely used to replace animal’s fur or other body parts.
Animal testing has played an essential role in the medical field. In recent years, with the speedy development of technology and science, animal experimentation with sophisticated computer programs that could bring more accurate results. For example, computer-based testing has been used to examine the new medicine or cancer treatments and has demonstrated effect. Therefore, it is no point in using animals to experiment new medicine and treatments.
In conclusion, standing on my view, products made by killing animals such as food, clothing or medicine isare no longer necessary due to the fact that people can replace them by vegetarian food, artificial clothing or computer simulations.
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...pressure or heart attacks. In fact that, nutrients from plants digest more easily...
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...to the fact that people can replace them by vegetarian food, artificial clothing ...
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...icial clothing or computer simulations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99283410833 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2603149308 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.666666667 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293871910318 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0953648487066 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860189253154 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185478548368 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0790529637983 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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