More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?
Nowadays, the more our society develops, the more people reach big cities for a more convenient life. They consider that cities always provide the best opportunities to develop their life. However, living in urban areas brings several drawbacks. In my opinion, the government could give suitable ways to improve city life
One of the serious problems is the cost of living. When migrating to cities, everyone has to pay various expenses such as houses, means of transport, food, or even water. These prices are much higher than in rural areas. For example, people in the countryside are likely to use their private transport instead of catching a bus, a taxi or public transport when moving to the office due to the traffic jam. Standard of life is also a serious problem in urban areas. Industrial development leads to environmental pollution. People in big cities tend to suffer air or water contamination from factories. These have adverse influences on their spirits and health. Moreover, residents in cities have to face social matters such as high crime and poverty. They always lack security and are worried about their surroundings.
In order to help tackle those above problems and make city life better, the government could bring out effective solutions. First, the authorities should invest the amount of money to build affordable accommodations. This can help people in cities save a great amount of money to support their life. Furthermore, politicians could launch useful laws in limiting vehicles from city center and promoting clean public transport. For instance, the higher taxes on private cars is, the more people use public transport.
In conclusion, city life encounters several problems. However, the government could certainly implement a range of measurements to enhance the quality of the life for the city residents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... give suitable ways to improve city life One of the serious problems is the cost ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26013513514 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74063749229 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591216216216 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3057939713 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.85 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.403145757048 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107973844998 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0965742839827 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265979016082 0.151304729494 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.097351349255 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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