Nowadays most green energy is becoming ever more prevalent in both developed and developing countries. Some argue they greatly reduce costs and are better for the environment, others believe they are a serious threat to energy security. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Recently both developed and developing countries have become concerned about green energy. Some people argue the fact that green energy costs less money and is much better for the environment. While others believe green energy is considered to be a fundamental threat to energy security. This essay will discuss the two points of views and argue into the favor of the importance of green energy in our lives.
On the one hand, people believe that green energy is the most common and prominent way to produce energy as it is a clean source of energy. To illustrate, a lot of countries now, whether developed or developing, are calling for the everyday utilization of green energy, even in schools. Obviously, green energy is much cheaper as it is generated from renewable sources which are naturally available. Equally important, green energy is the optimum source of energy for the environment when it comes to its preservation. As a result, green energy utilization has been provided by the government to many facilities just to save money and keep the environment clean.
On the other hand, others have been arguing the fact that green energy portrays a real threat to the security of energy. After monitoring the high increase of population in many countries, they believe that green energy is not enough to cover all the amount of energy needed for everything. In addition, they always seek alternative ways even if these ways depend on non-renewable energy just to provide what is needed. They argue that green energy is not a stable source of energy as the wind sometimes does not blow and the sun sometimes does not shine. As a result, they call for using coal, oil, fossil energy to compensate the consumed amount of energy.
To sum up, green energy is a clean source of energy that developed and developing countries are depending on. A lot explained the importance of green energy for it reduces the cost as well as it does not harm the environment. Obviously, green energy is a major source to be used nowadays because of its reliability and people’s health yet, others argue the fact that green energy is a critical threat to energy security in addition to its instability.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...and is much better for the environment. While others believe green energy is consider...
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... sources which are naturally available. Equally important, green energy is the optimum ...
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...curity in addition to its instability.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, while, in addition, as a result, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1821.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89516129032 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66451282034 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.456989247312 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 598.5 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8232575828 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.117647059 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8823529412 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11764705882 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.453680642345 0.244688304435 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1675781969 0.084324248473 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559875337587 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.313254831302 0.151304729494 207% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666484542464 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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