More and more young people from wealthy nations are doing unpaid work in poorer nations. What are the reasons and who benefits more from this: the communities or young people?
Voluntary work in developing states have become more popular for numerous youths who come from developed country. In accordance with this statement, this essay will explain the reasons of this issue and also put forward which sides would have more benefits.
In regard to the argument above, I do appreciate and agree to this activity since it renders countless positive things for the voluntary worker and destitute country. according to this, I do believe that there are two contributing factors of the reasons. Young masses from prosperous nations, first and foremost, desire to be a useful and helpful for other people, thus, they determined to enrol on this kind of activity in order to make them conferring new experiences, information and knowledges. Second but not less crucial, It is apparent that doing this activity will create the image of those youths becoming more valuable, particularly, the one who wants to enrol their higher education in university.
In accordance with the second question, beside the advantages for those young masses who come from affluent country, nevertheless, I tend to think that developing states will additionally derive two strengths of this excellent activity. Firstly, this great effort is going to provide an outstanding opportunity for all people who lived in economically deprived condition to obtain an aid, which is usually consisted by financial and material aid. It, secondly, is able to resolve the education tribulation in impoverished nations because it used to have an activity for educating juveniles who do not a chance to enrol and learn in education institution.
By way of conclusion, it seems to me that this great endeavour is supposed to be continued in later life since it is capable of rendering more upsides and fewer downsides for both sides. Therefore, in order to make it still happens, we have to support all kinds of activity like this.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 168, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: According
...voluntary worker and destitute country. according to this, I do believe that there are tw...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, kind of, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19032258065 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83746490304 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590322580645 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.6588898258 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.272727273 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1818181818 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1818181818 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253283657455 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903274480575 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434263999655 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151849041131 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525932856292 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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