More children in developed countries are becoming overweight. This is a serious problem for wealthy countries. Discuss some causes and effects of this problem.
Many developed countries face the serious problem of increasing child obesity., modern lifestyle and unhealthy eating habits seem to be the roots for such trend, and this will have some negative repercussions such as stressful life and less competent to work on both children and the nations, which will be outlined in the following essay.
The core problem of the increasing number of overweight children lies on the poor standards of kids’ upbringing and negligence by parents. The youngsters receive an unhealthy diet and are not encouraged to exercise. Moreover, parents are not vigilant of their children’s needs and neglect their health due to their stressful life. Furthermore, many advertisements falsely display high calory foods as healthy ones, which is having a negative influence on children as they are not able to distinguish proper diet. For instance, fast-food advertise their food to be rich in protein, and vitamins, but in reality, it is full of sugar and fats.
Juvenile obesity is affecting the country in several ways. Firstly, The workforce in the future will be unhealthy, less competent to work, and unable to perform several tasks, especially in high-endurance activities. It also affects them physically and mentally. For example, overweight children have image problems which lead them to suffer depression. Moreover, Obesity causes a multitude of diseases which is putting unnecessary pressure on the country’s hospitals to treat overweight children, which could be better utilized to treat patients with fatal diseases.
In conclusion, unhealthy habits of living in developed countries are resulting in children’s being overweight, thus endangering children’s future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58461538462 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99744467108 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607692307692 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.5776657315 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41666666667 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256713908551 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0821287961552 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770793764578 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161400935042 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496967308314 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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