More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why? Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?
In this day and age, lots of people are prone not to have their children soon like in the past almost because of the modernization of the world. In my point of view, this way wholly brings people more positive aspects than negative ones.
Two of the primary reasons why people nowadays tend to have babies late is their finances and time. Firstly, because of the modern world, the living standard has been increased whereby the costs for nursing a baby also rise. People nowadays have to spend many money that probably leading to the superior life for baby like insurance, milk, tuitions fee, etc. so they would need presumably at least several years to make their finances better. Secondly, baby care requires a vast amount of time. Most jobs in the modern world demand personnel’s overtime and flexibility in work, meanwhile an infant or even a kid still needs caring carefully from their parents.
In fact, this pattern yields people more benefits rather than disadvantages, because it helps inhabitants to adapt with the pace of modern life and avert the growth of overpopulation. Having a baby late is one way to resolve the problem of catching up with the modern world. In this age, people are almost required to have a time fund to improve and develop their life steadily, which means that they have more time to prepare and formulate a plan to raise their children in a better way. Additionally, the increased overpopulation is also confined indirectly. Bearing a baby later than in the past leads to the number of born people reduced, which continues leading to the increase of population - a big problem which humanity has been facing.
To conclude, lots of reasons prompt people to have children late, but these reasons are completely acceptable and rational for humanity’s life in this modern age.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 256, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...lso rise. People nowadays have to spend many money that probably leading to the supe...
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Line 3, column 256, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun money seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much money', 'a good deal of money'.
Suggestion: much money; a good deal of money
...lso rise. People nowadays have to spend many money that probably leading to the superior l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, while, at least, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91558441558 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5763526194 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561688311688 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1859651392 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.142857143 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302213628815 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100858004882 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0892887071864 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208696102754 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.084932173335 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.