The most important function of music is that it helps people reduce stress. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
It is believed that the key role of music is to ameliorate people of today's psychological disturbances. I somewhat disagree with this view as music is also of primary importance to other aspects of life, and the suggestion that the most significant feature of music is decreasing stress is not well grounded.
Music can be attributable to maintain honorable virtues, an entertainment activity, and a form of exhibiting one's values. Historically, Homo Sapiens have taken advantage of music to store and expand their base of knowledge covering customs, facts, and traditions. Due to this, music acts as a gateway for people exploring the history and culture of any regions or nations. Another responsibility of music is to provide people with a means of recreational activities. Given the fact that listening to people's favorite melodies gives them a sense of happiness, many individuals relish motivational songs while working, exercising or even doing their chores. From the musician's perspectives, music is a means of transferring their perception, belief, and emotion to the general public. This allows these artists to express their inner states and feelings, and contribute more masterpieces to the music industry. If music was not created, humans may find it difficult to sustain their cultural heritage, entertain, and voice their thoughts.
Admittedly, it is a fact that people are utilizing music for relieving themselves of stress impeding their efficiency. This stems from the belief that music can alleviate the negative implications from workplaces and private affairs. However, there are no compelling evidences prove that the profound impact of music is stress elimination.
In sum, I mostly object to the view that the fundamental benefit of music is to relieve people of pressure as music also affect other dimensions of human life. In addition,
empirical and experimental researches have not evidenced such notion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, well, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44701986755 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04800020501 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602649006623 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2272486501 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.666666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1333333333 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224323828721 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756568812078 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522396275995 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124768259519 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724448761671 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.54 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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