the most important problems will be solved during our lives time
With the development of society, countless small problems of our society have been solved. In this case, there is a controversial issue that whether the most crucial problems of our society can be resolved during our lifetime. From my own perspective, people will not solve the most important matter at the rest of their lives.
To begin with, some serious illnesses will not be solved in a short time. It is not an overstatement that there is no answer when modern medicine is facing a serious and strange illness. According to research, about 100 thousand people died last year because of all kinds of cancer, and most of them used to be cured by modern medicine. However, modern medicine only can prolong their life span but cannot kill all of the cancer cells in their body. A famous doctor in china used to claim that hardly can people solve cancer within one hundred years. It is obvious that during our lifetime, cancer, one of the most crucial problems, will not be solved.
Secondly, the unemployment rate has already troubled our country for one hundred years after the Qing dynasty have been destroyed. In this case, solving this serious problem is not too easy during the rest time of our lives. According to the and database article, Buffalo wrote that 30 percent of people would lose their jobs and 25 percent of citizens claimed that finding a job is not a readily thing at the beginning of Republic of China.
However, today still have 25 percent of employees lose their job every year, and still, 20 percent of citizens believe that they have trouble finding a job. From Buffalo’s research, it is a true thing that the unemployment rate has decreased several points during this one hundred year. However, compared to one hundred years ago the employment rate just decreased a little, so it is not an overstatement the hardly will we solve this problem during our lives time.
Certainly, our country has already solved many matters. For instance, providing laws to protect children and providing money for all students who do not have enough money to pay their tuition. However, the most serious and crucial problems, just like cancers and the employment rate, still need to pay many efforts to solve and are not easily solved during several decades.
In conclusion, the most serious and important problems like cancers and the unemployment rate will not be solved by using several decades years. Therefore, all of the most important problems of our society will not be solved during our lives time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 412, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...prolong their life span but cannot kill all of the cancer cells in their body. A famous do...
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Line 5, column 388, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('readily') instead an adjective, or a noun ('thing') instead of another adjective.
...izens claimed that finding a job is not a readily thing at the beginning of Republic of China. ...
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Line 10, column 157, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...using several decades years. Therefore, all of the most important problems of our society ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2103.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 430.0 315.596192385 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89069767442 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45449775335 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.451162790698 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 638.1 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9727204714 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.15 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 17.0 3.9879759519 426% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.469322986647 0.244688304435 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16700349424 0.084324248473 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.185980810967 0.0667982634062 278% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.295638289488 0.151304729494 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.203897332001 0.056905535591 358% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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