people prefer to cook food by themselves or eat at cafeteria
With the society becoming more and more developed, people have abilities to choose a life style which is different with others. In this case, some people might to prefer to buy food stuff, and then they will cook them by themselves in their home. On the contrary, some people usually do not want to cook food by themselves, so they prefer to have dinners in the restaurants or cafeterias. However, form my perspective, i choose to cook food in my house rather than eating outsides.
To begin with, the food which is cooked by our own usually is more healthy than the food which is cooked in the restaurants and cafeterias. As far as i know, many restaurants and cafeterias invariably want to reduce the cost of cooking food. In this case, they will use the food which is not highly fresh, and the oil which is used to cook food is not pretty healthy and clean too. I will use my experience to further explain this point. Once time, i ate the food which was cooked in the food store which was located nearby our community, then my stomach felt so uncomfortable that I had to go to find doctors. In order to find the factors which leaded me to feel uncomfortable, I bought a same type of food from this cafeteria. From the food, i realized that the vegetable which they used was not highly fresh, even some had already spoiled. After that, we also sent the oil extracted from the food to do test, the result of this test showed that the oil from the food had already been used for many time, the repeat oil usually could hurt human’ bodies a lot. From this experience, it is obvious to see that eating outsides sometimes are not very healthy.
Additionally, buying the stuffs to cook can help us to save countless money. This is because if you eat outsides, the eating taxes you will pay, the cost of process to cook food you will pay, and the tips you need to pay. On the contrary, you will not need to pay so much money to the cafeterias. For instance, if you buy stuffs to make a sandwich by yourself in the home, you just need to spend about 2 dollars. However, if you want to eat a normal sandwich in the Subways, KFC, you at least will spend 5 dollars. This is because,first you need to pay the processing fees, such as, fry, boast, second you need to eating taxes to the cafeteria, which are very high in some states or provinces. In the end, after to you eating, you also need to give waiters some tips which are also not cheap. Just from this event, it is obvious to see that eating in the home can help to save tremendous money.
In conclusion, i prefer to eat the food which is cooked by myself.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, then, at least, even so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2128.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 488.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.3606557377 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70007681154 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36560274002 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.428278688525 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 645.3 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.94265232975 263% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1141174686 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7272727273 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1818181818 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95454545455 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327827313779 0.236089414692 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107032747505 0.076458572812 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0935855673583 0.0737576698707 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251919913609 0.150856017488 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10269431321 0.0645574589148 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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