In modern societies, it is true that the time parents spend with their children is dwindling because both of them are working. There are a lot of reasons for it. However, this can cause a lot of drastic effects. This essay will represent the reasons and the negative effects of it.
As the population is increasing, competition among jobs and employability has risen inevitably as a consequence, which is the most prominent reason for the working of both parents. some studies in the USA have shown that the unemployment rate has been increased by 8% in all over the world. The other reason is that parents want to provide high-class educations and services to their offsprings while covering all domestic expenses and needs.
Working of both parents can damage the relationship between parents and children. This can also make children feel isolated, which can trigger anxiety, stress and mental problems. For instance: children who do have a lot of friends feel alone when their parents are not at home. The children can also do things or activities which are not socially acceptable or unconventional, when not under the supervision of their parents.
In conclusion, Parents are enforced to work for long hours to meet the basic needs of the home, as a result, they are not able to spend enough time with their children. which causes a catastrophic situation for children. It is regrettable that parents are not able to spend time with their children while they have to do.
- Most modern families have both parents working and as a result children spend less and less time with their parents.What is the reason for this?What problems can this cause? 56
- More and more people are moving away from an agricultural background to relocate to cities in order to look for work. What will be the consequences of this? What solutions can you offer? 73
- First impressions are important. Some people think that doing well in interviews is the key to securing the position.To what extent do you agree? 61
- Most modern families have both parents working and as a result children spend less and less time with their parents.What is the reason for this?What problems can this cause? 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1236.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.944 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73298079027 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 371.7 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.9373394269 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2857142857 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.42806263735 0.244688304435 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146043498131 0.084324248473 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617468132321 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25131986898 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653746250899 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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