Most people have forgotten the meaning behind traditional or religious festivals; during festival periods, people nowadays only want to enjoy themselves.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
As compared to the past, people these days desire to enjoy the festive period hence, have forgotten the underlying meaning of these traditional or religious festivals. Is the above statement really true or just a hoax?
In my opinion, we are indeed losing the touch with our traditions concerning festivals.
Festivals were of utmost importance in the older days. This led to people being very sound with the meaning behind each and every traditional and religious festival. However, because of the current hectic life, many find it difficult to keep up with the tradition and prefer to take a break and enjoy. For example, a significant amount of employees in the IT industry in India have US or Canada-based clients for which they have to work odd hours. The timings vary from starting the office at 2 pm to as late as 7 or 8 pm which then stretches to late-night, making the employee weary which in turn leads to negligence towards tradition.
Societal pressure is another reason for this trend. Even if someone really wants to understand the meaning, others pressurize them by making fun of their intention. This pressure demotivates the preservation of tradition and promotes enjoying the break. While the intent of pressurizing is not to demotivate them, but people fall into the trap of trying to be accepted by society irrespective of what it may cost not just to them but even to their culture.
In conclusion, I would like to reiterate by saying that in this contemporary world people are losing touch with their culture by not trying to understand the importance and meaning behind any festival. The reasons are many but the most important ones are the hectic life and societal pressure, both of which are not intentionally intended to separate us from our own culture.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: many finds
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Suggestion: the; IT
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, may, really, so, then, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93708609272 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75064333752 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579470198675 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1701638753 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.5 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274607361649 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861855071718 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837143967752 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141666527236 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595794992174 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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