Most people have forgotten the meaning behind traditional or religious festivals; during festival periods, people nowadays only want to enjoy themselves. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Throughout thousands of historic years, our ancestor had created a great deal of traditional festivals for numerous reason, especially emphasizing the ethnic solidarity. However, youngsters currently do not put this in their mind and have the tendancy of self-enjoyment in crucial festivals. From my point of view, I strongly disagree with this attitude to the traditional customs.
One of the main arguments against this is that the conventional holidays are occasions for people to gather with their family and friends as well. For instance, there are various people who settle down abroad for studying or working. Therefore, Tet holiday is the time for them to come back their own country and visiting their parents and relatives. Moreover, the people who travel back from foreign country could relieve their homesickness and the stress after a long-term period of going by themselves. Parents could give them a strong affection and refresh their soul.
On the other hand, taking part in traditional festivals, the young people could broaden their horizons about their home country’s customs and preserves their ethnic characteristics. This is the knowledge which is only passed over by the elderly in the relatives and even is hardly accurate in the Google information. The young also advertise their nation’s images all over the world so as to bring the country’s position on global scale. This more or less contributes to the country’s economy, politics or science, for example.
In conclusion, tradition plays a key role in human culture which should not be eradicated by the ignorance of modern people and should be encouraged to keep in protection as an immaterial value.
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- Most people have forgotten the meaning behind traditional or religious festivals during festival periods people nowadays only want to enjoy themselves To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 83
- Most people have forgotten the meaning behind traditional or religious festivals during festival periods people nowadays only want to enjoy themselves To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, moreover, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, more or less, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28996282528 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88357006147 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624535315985 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9476437824 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.461538462 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0769230769 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157371127211 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551271567573 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039062303924 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0935329221428 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045990761 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.