stricter punishments to improve our roads
Opinions are divided on whether stricter punishments for driving offenses are actually help to improve the safety of our roads or not. I can understand why people suppose that stricter punishments can bring effeciency to the public transportation condition today, but I also think this is not the only one, there are many alternatives less strict but also more effective.
I cannot deny that stricter punishments are a good way to deter the drivers to avoid offense against the rules of the road. This helps to protect the life of the traffic participants. Heavy fee for committing traffic offenses which serve as an illustration of strict punishments, people are afraid of pay fee while they can use this money to do buy new clothes or food. This causes the respect for laws from everyone. And in the statistic, the government has confirmed this is extremely effective.
However, with reference to these punishments, I reckon that there are many alternatives. One of them is loaning publicity campaigns, this helps the attitude in following the rules is on the increase and especially useful for children as they are easier to educate, a next generation would observe the laws seriously. And these campaigns should be repetitive to accumulate to people awareness. Another solution is upgrading public transportation system, although it costs a lot of money, it is necessary for the drivers because the stream of scooters, motorbikes, cars causes the road to be downgraded in days gone by and many regrettable accidents have happened.
In conclusion, the stricter punishments are an effective way to ease the traffic burden but they are not the only one, we can combine with a lot of options to improve the traffic condition.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 88, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'helped'.
Suggestion: helped
...ments for driving offenses are actually help to improve the safety of our roads or n...
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Line 2, column 305, Rule ID: AFRAID_OF_HEIGHT[2]
Message: The noun should be probably in the plural form: 'fees'.
Suggestion: fees
...t punishments, people are afraid of pay fee while they can use this money to do buy...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, so, while, i reckon, in conclusion, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07368421053 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9358085754 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561403508772 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.0050892442 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.5 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237005814033 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834192351878 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134368532333 0.0667982634062 201% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157713337727 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116210127777 0.056905535591 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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