Museums and art galleries should concentrate on works that show history and culture of their own country rather than works of the other parts in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Art galleries and museums play an important role in the preservation of a nation’s culture and history. Some hold the belief that they should put more emphasis on displaying indigenous works that represent national traditions than foreign ones. However, I am in disagreement with this as I suppose that they are of equal significance.
On the one hand, that some people who value the significance of the conservation of traditional values prioritize domestic artifacts over those imported from other countries is understandable. The reason is by visiting museums and exhibitions, young people may have a deeper insight into their own nation. For example, they will have a better grasp at what their forefathers and ancestors had been through as well as how they defeated themselves against foreign invaders during wartime only by taking a look at their clothes, weapons, and other war remnants. This not only brings educational values but also promotes a strong sense of patriotism and national pride in young generations. Moreover, these places have made a great contribution to the preservation of traditional and historical values. Due to international integration, many ethnic minorities are in danger of losing their distinct customs. Therefore, the exposure of their items such as arts and crafts apart from farming tools means to conserve their cultural identities.
On the other hand, I would also argue that it is essential to showcase artifacts coming from other cultures. By exhibiting works from other communities, people’s awareness of exotic antiques is more likely to be raised. This also means people will save a large amount of money because they do not have to travel from one place to another to pursue their passions. In addition to that, when international objects are exhibited, the museums’ content is diversified, leading to an increase in the number of tourists to the area. This is particularly necessary because it partly contributes to the improvement of income for the local residents.
To conclude, I strongly believe that apart from demonstrating the artworks and other old items of their own nations, countries all over the world should also show their respect toward other cultures by bringing foreign artifacts on display.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, apart from, for example, i suppose, in addition, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1909.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31754874652 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96436681476 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590529247911 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9367926045 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.3125 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4375 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5625 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229871696601 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649924417885 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550507919827 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145174997888 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403820806707 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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