More and more people send their personal information to the Internet. So their banking, shopping activities are done more easily. Do you think it is a negative or positive development?
In many developed countries, citizens usually leak their personal information on the Internet to make their banking, shopping online quickly. Some people hold the opinion that sending information on online platform is a negative trend, whereas other have the conflicting views. In the below essay, I will try to enunciate this with my own perception.
As the society is developing by leaps and bounds, there are some reasons why people think that leaking personal information on the Internet is a backward. Firstly, it is no doubt that putting few important information such as house address, phone number, portrait of ourself will lead to the risk of criminal using this information to invade victim private life. Furthermore, criminal can using this information to abuse the around acquaintance and causing numerous damages. Not only that, the economic will be affected by this action if the costumer carelessly reveals their information for the culprit. In other words, revealing information on the online platform are directly lead to the threatening of overall aspect in life.
As per them, if not accepting this requirement about information in this fast pace of life. Probably, they will face several difficulties such as wasting time for purchasing at the physical stores, losing time to transfer goods, appliances to home. For example, instead of buying production on online space, done by some mouse clicks, they have to commute to the local store that required to line, wait for the payment and after that they have to load on car, losing time to range it, and finally get home. Therefore, avoiding online payment in this era is such a huge unbeneficial and impossible to live without it.
In conclusion, by looking the above facts, concept of purchasing online definitely win the race. Therefore, I side with the latter statement that is revealing information for online payment is a positive trend.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, so, therefore, whereas, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17948717949 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76343767276 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1257544735 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.428571429 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15514989077 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585972367158 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702925768605 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101934354706 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0787886945795 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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