Not many young people in countries in the world go to and enjoy concerts and plays. Why is this the case? Should they be encouraged to attend and learn more about this genre of art?
It is the harsh reality that classical music concerts are less likely to appeal to audiences, especially in young generations or even not taken up the plays like that to watch these categories. From my perspective, there are tremendous reasons for this trend, and it is suggested that this issue be addressed.
Concerning a lack of enthusiasm for going into a concert, from to awareness of the meaning of classical music which is belonging to wealthy people or triumph architecture that be suited to the auditorium. Moreover, it is said that pop or rap is more common to young people by catching. In addition, the massive public media focus on these kinds of music, so that ignorance of symphonic music in acquiring young people of its kind worsen situations. Consequently, by shifting to the view of popular music which leads to the gradual reduction of concerts.
Standing on those matters, young people need to encourage within the concentrate on musical music which can be more beneficial for our unexpected health. What it means is that attends to classical plays or concerts could relieve stress. Indeed, Mozart and Beethoven are known for stimulating our brains that ease on their mind after hectic lifestyle. And more studies proposed that classical music does wonder in making infants release feel-good hormones by rhythms and no lyrics.
In conclusion, it is irrefutable that in favour of classical music is apparently taken to listeners in developing their emotion about the world. In the future, paying more attention to this kind of music is worth considering among young people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: belongs
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, consequently, if, moreover, so, thus, in addition, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1106870229 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77719953321 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580152671756 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8619351036 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.583333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208817778131 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773528120019 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496116797233 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130097461903 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0155181122066 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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