Nowadays children watch much more television than they did in the past and spend less
time on active or creative things. What are the reasons? And what measures should be
taken to encourage children to spend more time on active or creative things?
In these days, the problem of children getting addicted TV and having no time to do reactive activities has been receving a great deal of public attention. Given that this trend can be attributed to a whole host of reasons, certain feasible solutions should be taken into consideration.
There are a number of undoubted reasons explaning for this trend. First, since TV programs provide a myriad of attractive and eye-catching contents at disposal , this evokes children’s curiosity. In fact, kids have tendency to prefer unprecedented things which they have no chance to witness in real life, making them binge-watch most of the time as a result. Second, by devoting a large amout of time to work in an attempt to meet the standard of living, parents seem to leave no time and pay less attention to their offsprings. Therefore, lacking parental care is contribute to be vulnerable of children which makes them resort to watching TV for relax and mental rewards intead of dynamic experience with others.
Nevertheless, there are also a variety of solutions, mostly parental,to reverse this trend. First, in order to break a screen habit in kids, parent can help them set a daily limit. By encouraging children to consistently adhere to the limit, they would learn how to manage their time and self-discipline which help them less be reliant to TV addiction. Second, even if parents lack their time for kids, social organises and schools should co-operate to creative outdoor activities, which are also considered proactive. This promotes not only health mentals but also all-arounded development for children.
In conclusion, although this problem might be difficulte to reverse, there are ways to get around it. By applying one of the suggestions above, parents along with schools and social organises can be of great difference in children’s lifestyle.
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- Nowadays children watch much more television than they did in the past and spend less time on active or creative things What are the reasons And what measures should be taken to encourage children to spend more time on active or creative things 92
- Many people make friends through social sites and chat rooms Others believe that it is not a good idea to make friends without meeting them face to face Do you agree or disagree with this statement Give your own opinion and relevant examples 87
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, in conclusion, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20930232558 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97768847542 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617940199336 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6861366813 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130689604955 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0430022129455 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0314556249931 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0761770390609 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02743848105 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.