Nowadays food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live?
food is the basic necessity in a person's life.In the yesteryears, food preparation was difficult due to lack of technology but with the advent of technology food preparation has become a lot easier which has changed people's life.In my opinion, development in this field has improved life of people and points supporting it are listed in the following paragraphs.
The prominent alteration in life of individuals is getting food to eat within few minutes. The food which took hours to be prepared due to poor cooking facilities can be now made by using numerous utensils and efficient fuel. For example earlier masses used to make food by placing it over fire which took a lot of time while today the same kind of food can be made in much lesser time. Hence, life has improved of many with new methods of making food.
The other transformation of life that has taken place consequent to easy preparation of food is having variety of food rather than relying on just raw flesh and fruits. individuals these days can eat range of dishes which varies according to the regions.For example in past people used to hunt animals and collect fruits which was a tiring as well as time consuming job but today everyone has access to variety of food which gets easily prepared. Thus, people lives has changed due to advancement of technology in food industry.
In conclusion, although food quality has deteriorated as technology has advanced yet the benefits of easy food preparation overweighs it's drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1252.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92913385827 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72958181801 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566929133858 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.7199171929 49.4020404114 186% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.111111111 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2222222222 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2222222222 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240348870377 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108063196107 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818595750295 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148478679593 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688549218132 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.