Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree
The proliferation of the tourism in this day and age has raised a challenging question about whether the industry itself brings more tension over coordination between those with different culture backgrounds. From my personal perspective, I would take a dim view with this opinion.
First and foremost, we are all acknowledge that traveling is the best ways to enrich our understanding. Since pictures, movies and books are never enough in satisfying humans’ hunger for new horizons, people come to traveling as a powerful means of widening their knowledge. Moreover, along with the huge amount of knowledge being obtained is a profound understanding about others’ traditions. Tourists would learn to respect and accept the host nation’s uniqueness which will consequently foster the harmony and integration across nations. However, it is undeniable that there are still a few tourists whose behaviours are inappropriate and hostile to the country’s inhabitants and the local environment.
The second point that should be taken into consideration is the positive effects of global tourism on a country’s economic and society. It is undeniable that more and more employments are being created thanks to the continuous development of international tourism. In terms of developing countries, this is not only help the poor to make ends meet but also alleviate the country’s economic burden. Take the Philippines as the prime example, given that 70% of their population depend on the tourist sector as their main income, the country’s economy was nearly on the verge of collapse when the Covid pandemic limited people’s traveling mobility.
In a nutshell, it is my belief that global tourism, as the dominant industry nowadays, does more goods than harms to human beings.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 706, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s inhabitants and the local environment. The second point that should be taken in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45323741007 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07905264459 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651079136691 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.0249139053 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.818181818 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2727272727 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.54545454545 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152066746045 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499965863963 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572140636606 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0904443454398 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043308096677 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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