Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Currently, with globalized world, global tourism becomes more and more popular trend. People have tendency to spend more time getting away from the noise of their city and chilling out at other places. Some people argue that the growth of international tourism leads to conflicts between local residents and foreign tourists instead of absorbing different cultures. I partly agree with this view.
To begin with, it is clearly seen that global traveling creates pressure between people from distinct areas. First and foremost, debates are derived from the difference in language. For example, that international travelers do not have good command of foreign language which is spoken in destinations make them have trouble on understanding or expressing their ideas or feelings. As a result, tourists and local habitants can misunderstand each other and conflicts will be happened. In addition, the diversity of foreign tourists influences adversely on local culture. Due to the fact that international travelers have some words or manners which are not suitable for local culture, their behaviors will impact or even bother residents.
On the other hand, the effects of international tourism are not all negative. Firstly, some tourists live in harmony with residents and fall in love places where they visit. Travelers are keen on seeing beautiful views and talking to friendly habitants. Some of them even make a decision to go abroad and reside destinations since they find these places with suitable lifestyle. Moreover, several tourists have a thirst for understanding and accessing the world of culture. For instance, a lot of travelers spend more time finding and researching information of culture before they go sightseeing the country.
In conclusion, although worldwide tourism creates tension between people from different cultures, it is undeniable that a boost to tourism not only provides a range of opportunities to know about other customs, language, and history but also facilitates global residents to learn and experience real traditions of a nation.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1753.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46105919003 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85756568111 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566978193146 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.9889155626 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.117647059 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8823529412 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.52941176471 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242464399998 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751669778759 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621838346352 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154264538386 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499123468472 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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