nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for companies or organizations.
why might this be the case?
what could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
Over the last half century, most of the youngsters tend to work as a self-employed rather than being an employer. However being your own boss has a great deal of benefits, the disadvantages outweigh in a most situation. This essay will an attempt to discuss this state and provide some defensible reasons of the self-employed drawbacks.
The modern world we live in today, present us with many issues we didn’t use to being dealt with. One of the significant reasons is due to the fact that, nowadays employers are under pressure to meet the boss’s requirements furthermore they find it too tough to maintain a balance between job and family responsibilities. In addition, working for yourself, in point of young generation would be enjoyable for instance, the process of drawing up a business plan and seeing if you could success or not is the significant proof of being your own boss.
On the other hand, run up your own business seems to have some difficulties may be hidden in the benefits. Based on the research conducted in Japan, related to the society economical concerns, most of the shops have gone bust todays. As a matter of fact, it is reported to be very difficult to make profits because of cut-throat competition furthermore you need to do market research beforehand so you know what market really needs if you don’t tend to go under. Additionally, set up your business provide you with a lot of financial concerns as you are supposed to take out a high-amount mortgages consequently you are likely to being in debt.
To sum up, Although being your own boss preferably seems to be pleased for most new generation, it has to do with a lot of tough situation, that needs to be measured.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 115, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...employed rather than being an employer. However being your own boss has a great deal of...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, however, if, may, really, so, as to, for instance, in addition, you know, as a matter of fact, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80405405405 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90995871992 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591216216216 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.9124998859 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.272727273 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9090909091 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.6363636364 7.06120827912 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334669984957 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127314148961 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0859983807412 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220274010197 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792520631334 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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