Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep What problems can lack of sleep cause What can be done about lack of sleep

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Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep.
What problems can lack of sleep cause .
What can be done about lack of sleep.

These days, there is a growing concern that sleeping is not taken as seriously as before. In this essay, I will point out the profound effects caused by lack of sleep and put forward some feasible solutions helping people avoid lack of sleep.
Sleep deprivation can cause a range of mental and physical problems, including impairing your ability to think clearly and control emotions. Then has came poor work performance, as this state has occurred for a long time. Furthermore, people who do not get enough sleep are at far greater risk of heart disease or stroke than those who sleep 7-8 hours per night. The body frequently need recharging when you fall asleep. So when this is not permitted after the frequency of long working hours, it will shut down anytime.
It is believed that bathing your feet in warm water everyday can be a good way to avoid consequencies of not sleeping. Warm water boots blood circulation and stimulate the cardiovascular system to work effectively. In order to get a profound sleep, you also avoid drinking alcohol and caffeine within three hours of bedtime. Another solution is that reducing workload to combat fatigue giving rise to sleep deprivation. Normal hours of working time per day plays crucial roles in maintaining circadian rthythm which helps people have themselves a sound sleep.
In conclusion, sleeping is very essential. It can really reenergize you and improve concentration and productivity. It is hoped that lack of sleep will be limited significantly.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 150, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'come'.
Suggestion: come
... clearly and control emotions. Then has came poor work performance, as this state ha...
^^^^
Line 3, column 53, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ed that bathing your feet in warm water everyday can be a good way to avoid consequencie...
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, really, so, then, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06425702811 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77376042135 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.66265060241 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5778384113 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0666666667 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336606126959 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102260967917 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0821318291545 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21840918726 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050736600682 0.056905535591 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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