Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games.
What are the negative impacts of children playing computer games and what can be done to minimize the bad effects?
Due to the innovation of technology, there is an increasing ratio of youngsters playing computer games. This phenomenon can result in serious effects that can be coped with by appropriate measures.
It is possibly said that this issue may lead to several consequences on youngsters’ health. First of all, spending hours playing computer games can carry health risks such as obesity or autism. For example, children who are addicted to games might have a sedentary lifestyle so after coming back from school, they tend to be in front of computer screens immediately. To take steps to minimize these impacts, parents should spend more time talking with their offspring, thus, children may have chances to confide in them. Moreover, it is better for them to bring their children to zoos or parks in their spare time than to stay at home and have no interaction with each other owing to their reliance on technology.
In addition, youngsters taking much time to play computer games are more likely to lose chances to stimulate their social skills. Because of having less real interaction with other people, children who are glued to computers can undermine their communication skills or problem-solving skills. To solve the effects described above the government could conduct several measures. They should apply more life skills education programs in schools in lieu of just studying academic subjects. As a result, children not only can improve their practical skills but also can strengthen their bonds with friends. Besides, schools ought to cooperate with parents in educating their children by giving out assignments that ought to be done by both parents and children.
To sum up, there are several adverse impacts when youngsters are obsessed with computer games such as health-related diseases and social skills. To mitigate these risks, parents should pay more attention to their children.and the educational programs must be changed by the government.
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- Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games What are the negative impacts of children playing computer games and what can be done to minimize the bad effects 78
- Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games What are the negative impacts of children playing computer games and what can be done to minimize the bad effects 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 237, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'game'.
Suggestion: game
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, moreover, so, then, thus, for example, in addition, such as, as a result, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29712460064 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7523215312 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58785942492 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8912039423 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.533333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.86666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270210036916 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958589272021 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608100445079 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17913799261 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239337406588 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.