Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for pleasure. Some believe this
travel has a negative impact on the countries travelled to. To what extent do you
agree or disagree?
Recently, it is true that a significant number of people decide to travel abroad for enjoyment. While some argue that this tendency has detrimental effect to the nations that those people visit, I strongly believe that its merits outweigh its demerits since those people can reduce stress and governments can boost tourism.
To commence with, it is irrefutable that going on a trip to an idea destination can bring relaxation to people who have tension jobs. By having different recreational activities as well as experience new cultures and cuisine, they can temporary forget all the pressure from monetary needs such as fuel fees, goods or relationship problems. As a result, once they feel refresh and received positive energy from the trips then they are more likely to work more effectively and increase efficiency which means higher employee quality.
Moreover, this tendency can contribute to the tourism industry in many countries which take part in developing the economy amongst those nations. Since visitors travel for entertaining purposes, governments can offer them with trips to famous traditional handicraft villages which not only give incentives for their citizens to improve their skills but also encourage foreign people to understand deeper about local cultures. For example, Western people can visit and have a clearer definition about the silk industry in Eastern nations through tours that are offered with reasonable prices.
In conclusion, for the aforementioned justifications, I contend that the tendency of traveling for pleasure brings about positive effects. Therefore, authorities should focus on improving recreational facilities as well as developing traditional hamlets.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 85, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63706563707 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87935123356 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664092664093 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.3126626609 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.0 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1 7.06120827912 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183465072899 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722182136843 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659896077615 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112590547438 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601822395254 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.73 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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