Nowadays many teenagers have a celebrity who they follow as a role model. Some people think this is not a good idea, because celebrities often set a bad example. Do you agree or disagree?
In the current age, celebrities can reach younger generation through social media more frequently than ever. So, most teenagers nowadays end up having celebrities as their idol. The debate over having a celebrity as a role model has sparked debates on both sides of the spectrum. In my opinion, I agree that celebrities as a role model set a bad example for the youth mainly for two reasons, which I will discuss in the essay.
Celebrities set an unrealistic expectation of the world and of oneself for the teenagers. All the celebrities go through many surgeries and have a team working behind the screen to make them look picture perfect in every situation and aspect. Due to such extensive filtering, teenagers tart to compare the standards of real world with the world of celebrities and end up feeling inferior about themselves. For example, boys feel inferior since they do not possess the muscles like a celebrity do, while girls feel inferior about their looks and physique because the imperfections and flaws of celebrities are hidden under the unrealistic filtering. So, observing lives of celebrities will make today’s youth feel unhappy with what they possess naturally. Teenagers will not feel content with their lives and ultimately follow a bad path trying to achieve what celebrities show off on the media platforms.
Moreover, celebrities are distant figures whose lives are very little known to the teenagers. Whereas, there are many people all around in different professions such as doctors, teachers, police who are working diligently to fulfill their duties everyday. If the youth look to their surroundings, they will be able to notice these hardworking and honest people and these people are not beyond reach. For instance, any student can walk up to their teacher and have a genuine conversation with the teacher and the teacher will try his/her best in helping with any problem the student is facing. So, if the youth is able to observe the regular life of their role models who are within reach, they will get inspired more and will be able to comprehend the reality of the world.
However, some celebrities preach noble and charity works through media platforms which might inspire our youth generation. But, despite such charity efforts, celebrities do not set a good path for the younger generation because they are beyond reach of every teenager who sets them as their role model. Moreover, they set an unrealistic portrayal of their lives which manipulates the expectations of a teenager.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 247, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...king diligently to fulfill their duties everyday. If the youth look to their surrounding...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, moreover, so, whereas, while, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2112.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 416.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07692307692 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69196426381 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504807692308 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 651.6 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4146201209 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.333333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1111111111 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72222222222 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328123236825 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107366080464 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06370195212 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21409163182 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626384597966 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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