Nowadays more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? What are the effects on society and family life?
These days a lot of parents want to have children later in their life because of some justifications, effects on society and also family life. I partly agree with this statement.
There are lots of positive and drawbacks for having a child tardy in their life. First of all, in our community there are more people who got married in their young age but two third of them split up with each other, among them there are families who have got young children and most of them become orphan. The results depict that majority of partners are managing to have a child when they are ready to start their vital life.
But, it cannot be the only explanation for this argument. Communicational life demands most of time on work to live in a good status in society rather than being in family and family life becomes hard to keep balance. However, it lead to plenty of troubles in family. On the other hand, if people have a child later, in older age parents would be ready for family life and this family will keep a good relationship with each other and long-lasting entity.
By contrast, I would regret that the family who cannot the taste of being grandparents for their grandchildren because of having a child overdue in life and some of them die in early age.
In conclusion, It seems to me that ever person should realise that giving birth for a child is a gift of God that cannot be change to everything that is why we should think seven times than we react firstly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, third, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1200.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49438202247 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39882304554 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531835205993 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.6125131805 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.090909091 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2727272727 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.81818181818 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296785242893 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112036486872 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102658409084 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167046713639 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100584724372 0.056905535591 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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