Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? What are the effects on society and family life?
In this day and age, there is an opinion raising among people that children should appear in the later stage of their life. There are a host of factors attributed to this idea and the association between having children late and society development as well as family life can be witnessed.
Nowadays, a rising number of adults choose to have children late because of two main reasons: parents working and unreliable babysitter. For a start, in the past, women were mainly housewives, which means they have more time to take care of their children. However, in the late 20th century, women have joined the workforce and female labours have become more popular. As men and women are now going to work, the more responsibility they take, the less time they have to care for their infants and some people regard career as the main priority. Therefore, they make up their mind about having children in the later stage. A second point to consider is the increase in the number of unreliable babysitters. In the past few years, there are a vast amount of video showing child abuse commited by caregivers hence the common doubt of some parents toward this occasion. In short, due to the lack of time and the decreasing reliability of babysitters, a major of people decide to postpone the process of having children.
However, this situation has raised some detrimental issues to the society development as well as family connection. When it comes to society aspect, having children late results in aged population and health problems. For example, some women have children at the age of 40 or more may suffer from severe back pain and depression, moreover, they are quite old to have children so babies often die in a short time. Under another condition, family life, having children late enhances the generation gap between parents and children, hence the lack of connection inside the family.
In conclusion, it is logical for parents’ decision of having children late. However, there are some certain effects on the society and family that should be taken into consideration.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: hosts
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, in short, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1733.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96561604585 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58846325741 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538681948424 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2630738167 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.3125 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8125 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3125 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319285574258 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108523029404 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550559471262 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204475055511 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430517031721 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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