The line chart illustrates population trends globally by percentage from 1950 to 2040.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given charts provides information on global trend of population in terms of geographic areas and age groups between 1950 and 2040.
A glance at the chart reveals that whereas in rural areas, the population showed no changes, the number of global population from 1950 to 2020 in urban areas exhibited an upward trend and is predicted to keep raising until 2040, hence the rise in total population. In terms of age groups, while the number of people from 15 to 65 years old was on an upward trajectory and is expected to raise significantly until 2040, that of people under 15 or over 65 was relatively consistent and will remain unchanged in the future.
As presented in the first chart, in 1950, the population of rural and urban area are nealy the same, at around 5%. Until the present day, while the proportion of people in rural ares hovered around 5%, that in urban areas rose significantly by 5% each year and reaches 25% in 2020. The urban population is predicted to increase enormously to nearly 40% in 2040, whereas rural population will remain stable around 5%. As urban population rose, the total population increased as well. In 2040, the total population is expected to reach almost 45%.
In terms of age structure, in 1950, while the percentage of people under 15 and over 65 was under 5%, that of people between 15 and 65 years old accounted for 6%. The global population under 15 years old experienced a slight increase to 5% in 1960, and then hover around this stage for the next 60 years. In 1960, the proportion of people over 65 exhibited a minimal fall but then rose fractionally to 5% in 1980 and remained stable until now. On the other hand, the population in labouring age group increased significantly to over 30% in the presentday. While the proportion of people under 15 and over 65 is expected to hover around 5%, that of people from 15 to 65 is projected to rise slightly to 35% in 2040.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, then, well, whereas, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 79.0 33.7804878049 234% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 16.0 3.97073170732 403% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 965.302439024 164% => OK
No of words: 342.0 196.424390244 174% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64035087719 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 3.73543355544 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58748140447 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.40350877193 0.547539520022 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 467.1 283.868780488 165% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 11.0 4.33902439024 254% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 7.0 1.07073170732 654% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.4089451414 43.030603864 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.076923077 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3076923077 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 5.23603664747 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165028740094 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800784576184 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695823352486 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143165414607 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710885127823 0.0819641961636 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.4329268293 171% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.