Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? What are the effects on family life and society?
One school of thought holds that the more prosperous and civilized our society is, the more tardily parenthood is delayed. This essay attempts to shed light on the driving factors behind this tendency before elucidating the detrimental impacts of it on domestic life and communal prosperity as a whole.
There are two primary reasons as to why bearing children has no longer been the top priority of couples in recent years. Firstly, pursuing a flourishing career path is chosen by most young generations in the early stage of their life. Specifically, due to the increasingly prohibitive costs of living such as accommodation and tuition fees, it is immensely reckless for them to not retain a stable financial status, which might put their young kids’ high living standards in jeopardy. Secondly, it takes a long time for them to prepare a sufficient amount of parental knowledge. Typically, in Viet Nam, there are countless training courses, which were introduced to equip people with childcare skills, namely feedings and sex education, thereby avoiding a host of abrupt aberrations while raising their offspring.
There are two major problems that stem from this phenomenon. First and foremost, late childbirth could lead to a deterioration in women’s well-being. It can be perfectly explained by the fact that if they get pregnant after the age of 35, they could be at a greater risk of suffering from various serious diseases, such as miscarriage and stillbirth. Additionally, when people decide to have children when they are older, it can be seen that their son and daughter would not have abundance time to be enlightened and instructed by their father and mother, leading to the engagement in criminal activities of juvenile offenders, which could pose a threat to the security in the vicinity of that residential areas.
In conclusion, there are some underlying motives behind the fact that people tend to start a family later in life, and it is taking a heavy toll on physical health and the development of the community as a whole.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, as to, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1724.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11572700297 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8686090885 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623145400593 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.8467041522 49.4020404114 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.666666667 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0833333333 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205336497998 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562730802847 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543519285537 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109389021058 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027288011297 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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