Nowadays more and more people want to live by themselves. What are the reasons? Is it a positive or negative trend?
Life style and attitude towards life has been changing unconditionally. Without consider others ,people inhibit to their own life and oneself that a trend in many individual. However, in this essay explain the cause behind such behaviour such as, single child nuclear family and lack of love and affection which would be a negative inclination as a whole.
Initially, most of the family become small and forthcoming generation being in a selfish atmosphere. Earlier, joint family makes up every family members to share and care everything in terms of foods, shelter, dresses, jewels, and so on. Whereas, today's world has more prominent than before as a job security, financial and living standard, which may lead to people to be self centered and inability to aware about others from childhood. For instance, a survey report from UN established that, children from nuclear and broken family has a tend to be isolated themselves and fail to experience care and share would be a psychological problems like depression and anxiety in many children.
Innovative development on to the family settings and life style makes probably wrong outcome on to the individual and society as well. In other words, people who prone to be self centered develops lack of humanity and mankind on others like, poor and illiterates, refugees, and at least grand parents. At once they does not care about others pain, needs and even social problems which would lead to detrimental effect on nation and new generation. The main example of such attitude is that increasing number of old age homes in many part of the world that is, children could not find time to take care of their parents instead of own family like husband, wife and one or two children.
To sum up, being selfish and live for themselves is a ingenious trend in globally by the inefficient co ordination or foundation of family and there by produce a pernicious effect on future of every individual and society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...unconditionally. Without consider others ,people inhibit to their own life and one...
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Line 1, column 159, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun individual seems to be countable; consider using: 'many individuals'.
Suggestion: many individuals
...ir own life and oneself that a trend in many individual. However, in this essay explain the cau...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...dren from nuclear and broken family has a tend to be isolated themselves and fail to e...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'problem'?
Suggestion: problem
...care and share would be a psychological problems like depression and anxiety in many chi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of humanity and mankind on others like, poor and illiterates, refugees, and at l...
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'do'
Suggestion: do
...nd at least grand parents. At once they does not care about others pain, needs and e...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun part seems to be countable; consider using: 'many parts'.
Suggestion: many parts
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... find time to take care of their parents instead of own family like husband, wife...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lves is a ingenious trend in globally by the inefficient co ordination or foundat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, well, whereas, at least, even so, for instance, such as, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 10.4138276553 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99695121951 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70180270916 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579268292683 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.9863619455 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.583333333 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0737680149793 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0273630671273 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401371376178 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0480316890997 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0199376550036 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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