Nowadays, more people move away from their friends and families for work. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
The globalization has brought about mass changes in the way people live and work. Nowadays, there is a growing trend that people live away from their friends and relatives in order to pursue their career. The following essay shall shed light on both sides of the shift.
There are undeniable perks that moving away from friends and family offers. First and foremost, the person can completely focus on their work. Living alone spares them the room for chasing their career without being interrupted by menial things that may come from family or friends. They can advance their career and climb the career ladder with the best of themselves. To epitomize, there are writers who would live in isolation and will not return home until they come up with brilliant ideas. Secondly, people can choose to live far from their relatives to grasp opportunities. A prime example for this is the businessmen. To win the intense competition, they must seek for deals faraway, which require them to leave their home.
However, there are gearing downsides to be taken into consideration before a person decides to leave their family and friends behind in the pursuit of work. Initially, the moveaway will cause disrupt in relationships. Evidently, living far away from friends and family, to a certain extent, will weaken the bond. The close relationships that were previously formed start to be blurred by time and distance. There are cases where people are forgotten by their own kins after a too long time living away from them. Another point worth noting is that living without the accompany of friends and family raises the risk of mental health problems. Studies have pointed out that there is a staggering rise in the number of people facing mental problems, most of which are people who are isolated from family and friends. It is clear that this pitfall is not to be omitted.
In conclusion, while working far away from friends and family does grant distinguishing benefits, it comes at the cost of relationships and loneliness. From my standpoint, the disadvantages should not be belittled, but overall the benefits it brings to outweigh the short-comings.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 563, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...int worth noting is that living without the accompany of friends and family raises the risk o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1797.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01955307263 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62508164635 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54748603352 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2546293256 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5714285714 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0476190476 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365836104609 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101559915715 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808432701467 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226822155463 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0119188398568 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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