Nowadays most green energy is becoming ever more prevalent in both developed and developing countries. Some argue they greatly reduce costs and are better for the environment, others believe they are a serious threat to energy security. Discuss both views and give your opinion
It is argued that green energy leads to a decrease the cost, while others consider it dangerous for energy security. This essay agrees that green energy is environmentally friendly and contributes to diminishing carbon emissions. The essay will unpack the importance of green energy in our world and then discuss the negative impact of green energy.
Green energy became more important in our live. Also, it has a lot of benefits I will elaborate as follows. firstly, about Environmental Benefits it reduced greenhouse gas emissions and lower carbon footprint compared to fossil fuels. Moreover, mitigates climate change and environmental degradation. Also, it Preserves natural ecosystems and biodiversity. Additionally, it has Public Health Impacts: Cleaner air and water from decreased reliance on polluting energy sources. Secondly, Reduces dependence on fossil fuels. thirdly, Economic Opportunities: It drives innovation, job creation, and economic growth in the green tech sector. As well as, It Lowers long-term energy costs for consumers and businesses Potential for export of renewable energy technology and expertise.
On the other hand, there are few potential negative impacts that are worth considering: firstly, Cost Renewable energy technologies like solar, wind, and geothermal can still be more expensive to implement and maintain compared to traditional fossil fuel-based power generation, at least in the short-term. This can lead to higher energy costs for consumers and businesses. Secondly, Intermittency: Sources like solar and wind are dependent on weather conditions, which can lead to intermittent power supply. So, this requires additional infrastructure like energy storage to ensure a reliable and consistent power grid.
In conclusion, the energy transition to a greener, more sustainable system is essential, but it needs to be carefully managed to ensure energy access, reliability, and affordability for all. In my opinion, the incorporates both renewable and conventional sources is likely the best path forward in the near to medium term. Continued innovation, infrastructure investment, and policy support will be critical to overcoming the challenges and accelerating the green energy revolution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Firstly
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Suggestion: Thirdly
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, third, thirdly, well, while, at least, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1915.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.82066869301 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17650847852 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592705167173 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 612.9 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.1949219204 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.789473684 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3157894737 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.94736842105 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224331620316 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689850109703 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614613403599 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144362424018 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440119667235 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.84 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.18 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.43 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 78.4519038076 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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