In recent years, we have seen a considerable rise in the number people who choose to wear western clothes instead of the traditional one. There are various reason for this, and I consider it to be a positive trend.
There are several reasons why many people are likely to select modern clothing as apart of daily life. Firstly, they provide a sense of comfort for people who dress them. For example, sportspeople who play tennis often wear shorts, shirt, and training shoes, and therefore can easily move during competition time. Secondly, a rich variety of modern style and affordable prices allow customers to have many options. They are able to wear them either in work or social contexts, while traditional clothes just wear on some special occasions.
In my view, the changes described above should be seen as progress. Nowadays, more and more people wear western clothing may contribute greatly to the fashion industry. In doing so, a healthy economy can result in job creation and a high level of employment in textile manufacturing. Another positive is that the introduction of western clothes may enhance the values of traditional dress. For instance, Vietnamese white-collar workers often wear suits and skirts in the workplace, while they just wear Aodai in some important days. Aodai is the most well-known all over the world and becomes Vietnam’s symbol.
In conclusion, it is clear that there are could be several reasons why the western dress is more popular in the world, and I believe that these developments are desirable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09019607843 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70970460361 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596078431373 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.0337395308 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7142857143 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2142857143 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294123428038 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916691118353 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621341825947 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175278710869 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513025381809 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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