You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports, while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
You should write at least 250 words.
Nowadays, it is said that the authorities should forbid dangerous sports, while others believe that everyone should have the liberty to join in any sports or activities. From my perspective, I think that despite the freedom to challenge in any sport will bring satisfied emotions, dangerous sports should be banned to ensure the life safety of society.
On the one hand, people have the right to try any challenging sport or risky activities. The feeling of stepping out of their comfort zone, and pushing themselves in an extreme limit will help them release the stress at work or in daily life. Moreover, this option will aid the youngsters to explore new abilities, gain bravery, and be fearless to deal with obstacles in social life. For example, in Germany, some depressed patients are encouraged to try some dangerous activities such as jumping out of a cliff or riding F1 car under the supervision of experts. Luckily, these patients had overcome successfully their trauma in the past and reintegrated into society.
On the other hand, dangerous sports cause enormous consequences relating to life safety. Every year there are many accidents from dangerous sports that lead to permanent injuries or even deaths for players, bringing tragedy to family members who have to suffer hurtfully for the loss of their loved ones. In addition, the organizers of these dangerous sports tournaments will not take full responsibility for the players if any issues happen, therefore it is not worth risking our own lives for dangerous activities. For instance, in F1 racing tournaments, there are tremendous accidents happen so that the organizers require the contestants to sign an agreement to ensure they have to protect themselves on the road and not blame the organizers in any circumstances.
To sum up, although playing dangerous sports will bring some pleasures to the players, it should be forbidden to ensure the life safety of residents
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17405063291 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8066088 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575949367089 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.8167634004 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.25 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255139728832 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0961940181184 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876767172161 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171259360527 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105540411429 0.056905535591 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.