Nowadays, older people who need employment have to compete with younger people. What problem does this cause and what are the solutions.
It is irrefutable that the out-competes in the workplace are existing matters in this day and age, namely between elderly people and young people that are sought to the job to serving own’s basic of daily life. Looking from an overall perspective, that is true that the majority of negative effects which are causing for job-seekers and need to cope with these immediately that be mentioned in this essay.
First of all, this is initially some minimizing the opportunity career or own’s emotions about frustration and unmotivated when they are facing or catching up with those who are more experienced in the specialized domains. Indeed, the young people are restricted in their expertise and are performed in showing their skills, so that elderly people will be preferring in the application round and further will be choosing. Nevertheless, some employers proposed that the old generation could not acquisition the technology advance with comparison to the young people. What meant is that is their career can stand on the brink of unemployed or even had delivered into other departments and positions about how are appropriated with their ages.
On the other hand, these troubles are increasingly in our community that need to be getting around the problem as soon as possible. The government should have encouraged the firms are launching some jobs for fresh-graduated whether or their knowledge and experiences are not adapting in aspects of works. Whereby, the company will be obtaining outcomes such as are gaining more creative ideas relying on their contributed own’s grey matter and witnessed a considerable soar by manufacturing goods. Lastly, the government need to proposing much welfare for the elderly people so that they do not to find the job.
In conclusion, the competition in the workplace is worthy of notice in the day to come, the young and older people played a primary role in the labour market which the country can be able to develop nation’s budget to guarantee for dwellers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...eir skills, so that elderly people will be preferring in the application round and further wi...
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Message: Did you mean 'need to propose'?
Suggestion: need to propose
...facturing goods. Lastly, the government need to proposing much welfare for the elderly people so ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, lastly, look, nevertheless, so, well, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1690.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15243902439 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87221498193 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564024390244 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.1081540482 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.636363636 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8181818182 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.90909090909 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221024164258 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718961564473 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373483863056 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119184608701 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461698214613 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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