There are split opinion regarding movies are good for entertainment and have some educational values. Some people think that movie should watch only for entertainment. On the contrary, some of them think that movies should have some educational values also. However, both has its own pros and cons. So, before commenting on my decision, both opinion would be discussed.
To initiate with, the discussion of films should only be for entertainment. Firstly, we discussed that mostly people like to watch movie for refreshment and when they doing some hardwork and want to free from stress. They like to watch entertaining and action movies. For example, 'Entertainment' movie is very good for mindfresh purpose. In the same way, some directors are like to create documentaries that are make learning more interesting and children like to watch documentary. Similarly, some like to make movies on history of India which is very good for those who don't know about the history and feeling bored while they read history book.
On spite of, some people think that movies have some educational values also. Educational movies create the knowledge about education and motivate the people for education and education is most important part of our life and it's a fundamental rights of every child. As well as, they show the poor education system of India which should be improved by government for brighter future of India and children. Finally, government provide some benefits of education for those who don't have too much money or don't able to provid study to their child. With the help of movie people are aware of the act of education like, the Right to Education Act, 2009 also known as RTE Act, 2009.
To conclude and give my opinion, I would say that movies are mostly used for refreshment and entertainment purpose. Accounting to me children don't watch to movie because some child learn to behave badly and crime from movies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, similarly, so, well, while, for example, as well as, on the contrary, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01557632399 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61009742601 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501557632399 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.3555570852 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4444444444 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8333333333 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.77777777778 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268717515713 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102075685904 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729788401188 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173041526877 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704714667588 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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