Nowadays parents give more freedom to their children than in the past. Is it a positive or negative development?
Give your opinion and include relevant examples.
Today more freedom is given to children by their parents than what it was used in the past. This essay will discuss whether I believe this to be a positive or negative development and give reasons behind my point of view.
Overall, when children are given space and the chance to make the choices for themselves, the door to an infinite number of experiences is opened. Although it may sound like the parents are spoiling them, it can help them to feel and to be more autonomous. It has been proven that children who are more listened and who had the choice to make informed decisions about their life are more prone to grow up as satisfied adults. Boundaries and limitations are fundamental while growing up, but a dose of creativity and self-esteem does not harm even on the younger children.
On the other hand, having too much freedom can have many drawbacks, including turning into impolite adults. For example, rich kids who grew up doing everything they wanted, without being educated or taught good manners are often not able to be a productive part of society. I believe that children should always be supervised and guided when making their choices, or they will grow into lost adults who always choose to do whatever they wanted to, but without the ability to distinguish right from wrong.
To conclude, to give freedom to children is essential to help them express themselves, but being young and inexperienced they need to be silently guided. Otherwise, parents who do not guide their children in making their choices can do more harm than those who over discipline them.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, while, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81684981685 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52352508007 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59706959707 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.140680131 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.545454545 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8181818182 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239883921119 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0943463853568 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806960376989 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172137389478 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106741640397 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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