Nowadays parents put too much pressure on their children to succeed. What is the reason behind this? Is this a negative or positive development?
As the world is developing parents want their children to be counted among successful people and thus, end up pressurizing them. however, personally I feel that, this has very ill effect on the children's future.this essay will highlight the reasons for this attitude of parents and the impact of the same on children.
No parent in general would think ill for their child. they always try to give them better but unfortunately, this thought is creating a negative, competitive cold society. Firstly, as the world is advancing and literacy rate is booming being literate is not just enough in the society. one needs to be smarter than others, so as to get absorbed by the renowned organisations. Hence, this is the main reason as to why parents pressurize their child to study hard. Secondly, arts and sports does not hold good recognition in the society unlike science or business. Therefore, studying hard is considered to be the only key to be successful.
however, irrespective of the reason and intention, forcing children to do something against their will is definitely unacceptable. There are various factors that makes it evident that pressure has negative impact on child's future. For example, children those are forced to study when young quit to study further. one reason is, they are too scared of failure and fear of getting pressurized haunts them. Additionally, since no one enjoys being forced children tend to dislike studies and fail to study enthusiastically. Finally, they have a feeling that they have studies enough and didn't enjoy any plays thereof ind studies boring. in contrast to this, students who are taught to balance between studies and other activities like playing become successful at the later stages even if they were not the brightest.
To recapitulate, parents should motivate their child to study and not pressurize. As pressure will only lead to degrading their future and not forming it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, as to, for example, i feel, in contrast, in general, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17034700315 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77561654577 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615141955836 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9656689418 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0555555556 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6111111111 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246404103428 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781650467267 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757890924741 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166840544232 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690015342939 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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