Nowadays, some celebrities such as film stars, sportsmen and pop musicians are paid too much money? Do you agree or disagree? Which jobs should be highly paid?
There are umpteen number of professions, one can choose to work in these days. To which, it is considered that career's like movie stars, sports person and music celebrities are paid a hefty amount of remuneration. I am in consummate accord with this notion for a number of reasons which will be elaborated in further paragraphs along with some other jobs which require high pay-cut.
As to why well-known people deserve higher wages, the predominant cause is that they contributed a lot money, effort and time to achieve their dreams so it is their right to recieve lofty amount of wages. To exemplify, Sachin Tendulkar, well-know cricket player of India started his carrer from his scratch and achieved his present position after a long journey. A second dominant reason is that to entertain and love upto the expectations of people of their fans, famous people faces a lot of dangers and struggles. For instance, a well-know chinese actor (jackie chian) and his crew often perform stunts without a stunt doubles and they have no life insurance so it is necessary for them to be paid highly. Similarly, musicians also suffer a lot as they have to invest a ton of money on producing videos and music, even on purchasing them. To instantiate, it is often cited that celebrities like Diljit Dosanjh, Inder Pondori and Jassi Gill make very expensive productions by expensive cars, guns, locations and VFX which cost huge amount of money.
On the other hand, some other jobs like doctor, engineer, accountant, sales marketing, teacher are also the rightful owner of hefty salaries. The preponderant cause of such view is that these professions also require huge amount of money, effort and time to be achieved. For example, it takes five years of time, and appropriately 3 lakhs of monatery expenditure. Another reason is that these jobs contribute much to the country and its economic growth. To supplement this view teachers play biggest role in developing the future of nation as they help students to become engineers, doctors, laywers and etcetera.
To encapsulate, each job deserves high salaries, however, I believe that remuneration should be paid according to skills, qualifications, efforts and the dangers faced by a person on a particular job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, similarly, so, well, as to, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1886.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0563002681 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77328448136 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603217158177 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1029785538 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.733333333 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8666666667 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.93333333333 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19468285934 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571128389844 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566762925013 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127894938319 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497098862672 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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