Nowadays some parents pressure their children to be successful. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or negative development?
As success is one of the most significant part of every individual's life, parents want their children to be successful. Thus, there are some parents who are making their children succeed in something. This may because of the idea of earning much money which they think success can be measured by wealth. However, providing that children are engaged in things that are required by the pressure of their parents, they are unlikely to be successful in life.
There are some reasons why parents are pressing their children to achieve success. In the past life was not as easy as it is today and a family had only one member to keep the family. Job prospects were not so high as the technology was its developing process. Parents had at least four or five children in their family for that reason to earn a living was even more pressing problem as they were in need of money and people thought money was the key to a better life and success.
As life is much better than the past there is no need to worry about money or starving and parents ought not to force their children do something in order to be successful. So long as kids are pressed to death with something that are out of their interest, they are likely to fail. Unfortunately, it would be late when parents realized that they were making their children to be unsuccessful instead of being successful.
To sum up, although parents mean no harm to their children, they are pressing them unconsciously by making them do unfavorable things. Being successful in life can be gained by doing interesting things that people like.
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- Some people argue that it is important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money. Others disagree and think that a good salary leads to a better life. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 57, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...e of the most significant part of every individuals life, parents want their children to be...
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Line 3, column 320, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...st four or five children in their family for that reason to earn a living was eve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, thus, at least, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 13.1623246493 236% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1311.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68214285714 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52212404411 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4466190686 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.846153846 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61538461538 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313304861148 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122901384295 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736667955562 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192170075196 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641031911653 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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