Nowadays there is a growing shift towards the use of cashless transactions While some people argue in support of a cashless society claiming that it is beneficial to citizens others raise concerns about security To what extent do you agree or disagree Use

In this modern day of technology development, cashless transaction has become a popular way of transferring money. Whereas advantages raise agreement among cashless society, others cas doubts on its insecurity. Given is the essay discussing and explainations my opinion.
To begin with, the flexibility and convenience of cashless transaction has faccilitated people’s lives. With a smart phone and few manual acts, ther is no need for a person to carry a huge amount of money and be able to send or receive money quickly. Therefore, the situation of being stolen or getting lost of money is eliminated and gie the user a comfortable sense when doing transaction. Secondly, online means of tranferring has a system which save any information about the latest and even furthest to help them to keep track with transacting money. Besides that, this history allow people to calculate and inform with their counterparts in business.
On the other hand, transaction without cashs still has unxepected drawbacks. The popular phenomenon ther appeared among the elderly group. Old peole, in particular, who don’t understand thoroughly and unable to keep up with the modern technology, will find it hard to manipulate onlien. Moreover, there are more and more hackers who play tricks on them which easily leads to lost information and money.
In conclusion, cashless transaction also has it two side eddects, thus, users had better apply in careful ways.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, whereas, in conclusion, in particular, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1224.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2987012987 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93426670625 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.675324675325 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7135850905 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1538461538 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7692307692 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9230769231 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11845938386 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.043522698005 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452813025265 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0743414102168 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342149434687 0.056905535591 60% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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